This is my journal for T1 W2:
Yesterday, my Chinese teacher had given us tons of homework which needed to be completed in a day. My friend Hock Lee was not happy with the teacher and said that he planned to make the teacher regret it. I thought that he quipped with me and dared him to do it. After a period, he shown me a comprehensive sketch on how to avoid the security cameras in the staff room.
I was impressed that he had managed to plan a route which could not be seen by the tight security. However, after knowing him for so long, I knew he would attempt to sneak in later but I also knew that it was fruitless to persuade him. Still, i tried to stop him since he was too rash in making his decision. He had insisted on going and pushed me away.
The next day, the school had put up a remuneration for anyone who knew anything about the stolen hand phone and the vandalised table for my Chinese teacher. I knew it was Hock Lee but i was confused on whether to tell the school or not. In the end, I made a decision which i thought would be the best for Hock Lee, which was to tell the school about him.
(This story is a work of fiction. names, characters, places and incidents are products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual events or person is entirely coincidental)
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Good effort in writing this entry.
I don't think 'renumeration' can be used as a replacement for 'reward'.
Good text written, i'm impressed by your writing skills.Anyway,good effort and continue to strive hard for O 'levels!
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This is my feature article:
Do you know a gambling addicts or are you one yourself? Well i knew an uncle who was very addicted to gambling. My uncle spends all his free time at "private" gambling dens. He had used most of his paycheck at the gambling den and only won back around a third of his entire expenditure so far. He would sometimes be very happy if he had won more than he had lost on some days which just let to higher bets and bigger losses. However, now he is able to control the urge to gamble through some help.
Gamblers nowadays are doing things like embezzling company funds, stealing of money from their own relatives or making robberies. Gambling could be a factor for the the rise in crime rate this year. Most people will try to obtain money through any means to pay off their debt or just to "give" away these money to casinos or dens. Some gamblers will limit themselves to resonable amount of money they can spend there. They would leave the gambling place after they reach the limit they had set. Others may had set a limit but when they reached their limit, they would desire for more and ignore their own limit and continue to play. Gamblers who run up to huge amounts of debt tend to turn to "big ear longs"(loansharks). When they get the money, they would pay back a portion of it and try to win back the amount they lost again with the remainder of the money. However, this would make them lose the amount they had borrowed and the loansharks will take horrible actions if the gambler is unable to pay back. Even after being threatened, some gamblers will still continue gambling away money instead of earning it back through labour. This shows the damage an addiction to gambling could cause.
So gambling could be a way to relax and perhaps by luck win some money, but there would be risks and losses and the gambler's life could be in danger. If you know someone who is addicted to gambling, advise them to seek help to cease this addiction. If they are able to stop the urge, they will be able to control their losses and not just wasting all their time and money on gambling.
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What's the title of your feature article?
Keep writing to improve your English, not because you want to get marks for the assignments.
I'm sure you can write well in proper English.
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Posts on this blog will contain mostly mr kek's assignments and maybe some other stuff...but most will be homework. For ALL of my homeworks assignments i would have to write in proper english which would be hard and i hope to get full marks for all those assignemts~!Anyways...i have a bit of problem with my post tittle and comments so please use my tagboard untill i solve it...thx...
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