This is my journal for T1 W2:
Yesterday, my Chinese teacher had given us tons of homework which needed to be completed in a day. My friend Hock Lee was not happy with the teacher and said that he planned to make the teacher regret it. I thought that he quipped with me and dared him to do it. After a period, he shown me a comprehensive sketch on how to avoid the security cameras in the staff room.
I was impressed that he had managed to plan a route which could not be seen by the tight security. However, after knowing him for so long, I knew he would attempt to sneak in later but I also knew that it was fruitless to persuade him. Still, i tried to stop him since he was too rash in making his decision. He had insisted on going and pushed me away.
The next day, the school had put up a remuneration for anyone who knew anything about the stolen hand phone and the vandalised table for my Chinese teacher. I knew it was Hock Lee but i was confused on whether to tell the school or not. In the end, I made a decision which i thought would be the best for Hock Lee, which was to tell the school about him.
(This story is a work of fiction. names, characters, places and incidents are products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual events or person is entirely coincidental)
5:15 PM
2 Comments:
Good effort in writing this entry.
I don't think 'renumeration' can be used as a replacement for 'reward'.
Good text written, i'm impressed by your writing skills.Anyway,good effort and continue to strive hard for O 'levels!
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